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alterations of my story line

Thu Nov 19, 2009, 2:27 AM
as ive said ive come to the realization that my story line needs alteration ...well not really it needs order i have a friend on FA who gave me a brilliant observation declaring
he fully didnt understand my story line's time line . so ill give you a bit of it here .

it starts out like this , lewis is at his home in bama the story line seems like a realistic anime , but its seemingly based in our time with a bad economy and a pissed off population.
4 weeks into it sumthing happens in the middle of America ,a town is attacked and destroyed by unknown enemy's depicted as some form of robots ,suddenly every one freaks out declaring its china or japan and America starts declaring war on country's .
so were in a bad economy our pres is declaring war, all american citizens are already pissed
so people start protesting and rebelling (lewis already being a confederate southerner starts a confederate rebel faction)there are in total five faction the confederacy ,the Aryan brother hood ,the anarchist faction ,the libertarian liberation front,and a unknown Communist faction ,the two biggest factions are the confederacy and the aryan brother hood a.k.a. the arkadian troopers .
after a year of fighting the confederacy wins with the most legendary take down of DC via the aid of the peoples republic of china's new space battle cruiser the ARMS BRAD that was a gift to the confederacy .

soon after the confederacy starts realizing troops are being attacked in-side America so they recon and find a teleporter from the mobian home world to ours ,they send in a scouting party composed of lewis , drodz ,price, and jerry .
but when sent through the portal they bring 3 homing beacons so that the ARMS BRAD can find them , lewis tells swat to stay behind to take care of the confederate government
while hes away .
(if i can make this into a flash this would be the first movie )
but after the confederacy beats the union the union states are re attacked and taken over .... can think who beat em ..... a underground Aryan Nazi movement that creates the arkadian troopers .
but while the ARMS BRAD finds the mobian home world another ship is created ,the equilibrium.

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